• Help me fix my essay! I'm an English learner (5stars)?

    Today, I had got a bad beginning. I woke up 15 minutes later than usual and my mom had already left to work at that time. It means that I had to prepare the breakfast for myself. Nevertheless (or Luckily), I still got to my office in time. When I was starting to work, I realized that my computer had a problem. It was running very slowly and... hiển thị thêm
    Today, I had got a bad beginning. I woke up 15 minutes later than usual and my mom had already left to work at that time. It means that I had to prepare the breakfast for myself. Nevertheless (or Luckily), I still got to my office in time. When I was starting to work, I realized that my computer had a problem. It was running very slowly and restarting automaticly. Therefore, I needed some support from the IT department. They did a good job and right after it was fixed, I came back to work. I finished my work at 5 p.m but still not want to back home so I called my girlfriend to go out for releasing the stress. Luckily, she was still at her office. Then we met at a cafeteria. We was talking about all the thing happened with us today. It was really happy. I came back home at 7 p.m and my mother already prepared the dinner for everyone. So I just changed the clothes and had dinner. It was delicious because the foods made by my mother is number 1. After the dinner, I washed the dishes, then went to bathroom. And now, I am chating with my girlfriend and and will be on bed at 11 p.m.
    1 câu trả lời · Other - Family & Relationships · 2 năm trước
  • Help me fix my essay! I'm an English leaner (5stars)?

    I got up at 6 o’clock, then I went to WC, washed my face, brushed my teeth and had breakfast. I went to work at 6:45 am. Because today our company had a social audit, so at first, I prepared documents and then I walked around to all workshops, especially warehouse, workshop 5 and boiler rooms for preparing in advance the visit of the auditor. When... hiển thị thêm
    I got up at 6 o’clock, then I went to WC, washed my face, brushed my teeth and had breakfast. I went to work at 6:45 am. Because today our company had a social audit, so at first, I prepared documents and then I walked around to all workshops, especially warehouse, workshop 5 and boiler rooms for preparing in advance the visit of the auditor. When I finished, I started informing all workers about the answers for the auditor’s questions in the radio system. At 8:30 am, when auditor came in our factory, I went to QA room for meeting her. The auditor is a girl, she’s 28 years old, same with me. We were talking very funny. She’s beautiful and open. We checked the time record and salary docs of employees from 9:00 am to 11:00 am. After that, we visited the canteen, workshop 5. In the cutting room number 5, she tested the fire alarm system. It worked pretty well. We went to the boiler room and warehouse. There aren’t big problems there, so we came back to the QA room. While she was writing the report, I was relaxing. At 11:30 am, we had the closing meeting. In general, the result is good and it made us feel very happy. After closing meeting, we went to Rùa Vang restaurant for lunch. We were talking many, many things together. And now, I’m studying English with my friends – 3600 team.
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  • Please help me fix my essay! I'm a English learner! (5stars)?

    Hi everybody! What did you do yesterday? As for me, after learning English with my team, I had a plan for the evening. I intended to eat snacks and drive around Bac Giang city to relax. But there was a special invite from my manager. She wanted to eat some hot foods and we thought that BBQ restaurant is our choice. That was the first time I got... hiển thị thêm
    Hi everybody! What did you do yesterday? As for me, after learning English with my team, I had a plan for the evening. I intended to eat snacks and drive around Bac Giang city to relax. But there was a special invite from my manager. She wanted to eat some hot foods and we thought that BBQ restaurant is our choice. That was the first time I got there. When we were there (or came in), we sat in a Christmas space with many pines, twinkling lights and a Santa. Wow, I realized that the Christmas is coming. Then, the staff prepared a stove for grilling and brought foods out. There were many delicious foods to grill such as shrimp, beef, pork, cuttlefish…and buffet food such as Sushi, salmon, Taro Le Pho...We were eating and joking with (or telling) some funny stories. During the dinner, my manager shared a lot of her experiences about the work and life. Finally, we end of the meal by a cup of yoghurt and caramel. Our stomachs were full of foods. I really appreciated (or thanked) my manager for last exciting evening! Thanks!
    2 câu trả lời · Other - Food & Drink · 2 năm trước
  • Please fix my essay for me, I am a English learner. (5 stars)?

    Let me talk about yesterday. I got up at 6.15 o'clock, quite late...I was hurry going to work without having breakfast. My company working time start at 7 a.m, and I came there at 7.10 a.m. So lucky, the entrance was still open, and I was not punished. We finished all work at 5 p.m. Suddenly, my manager informed that Ms.Dao Hường's... hiển thị thêm
    Let me talk about yesterday. I got up at 6.15 o'clock, quite late...I was hurry going to work without having breakfast. My company working time start at 7 a.m, and I came there at 7.10 a.m. So lucky, the entrance was still open, and I was not punished. We finished all work at 5 p.m. Suddenly, my manager informed that Ms.Dao Hường's mother in law was sick, and we would visit her at Bac Giang hospital. After that, we prepared to go home. But, one of us said that she wanted to eat Banh Xeo at Hoang Van Thu street. Oh, it was a great idea so we all agreed. At the end of the meal, we ate 4 plates of Banh Xeo and 2 plates of Nem...They were so delicious. And I think that I would come back for them soon. The day was ended in the cinema with the "Transporter" movie. This film was exciting and fantastic with a handsome actor. I went home at 22 o'clock and went to bed with a nice dream.
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  • Please check this task 2 for me! (Ielts). I WILL GIVE YOU 5 STARS!!!?

    In many countries more and more young people are leaving school but unable to find jobs. What problems do you think youth unemployment causes for individuals and the society? What measures should be taken to reduce the level of unemployment among youngsters? ================================================ Today, the young being... hiển thị thêm
    In many countries more and more young people are leaving school but unable to find jobs. What problems do you think youth unemployment causes for individuals and the society? What measures should be taken to reduce the level of unemployment among youngsters? ========================================... Today, the young being unemployed after their graduation has become a social concern. This essay shall discuss the negative impacts of this issue on both individuals and community and suggest some solutions for it. To begin with, young people without work is the reason for the increase of social evils, which results in bigger amount of criminals. As a part of them cannot get jobs, they turn to dark ways to live, such as drug selling or prostitution. Another part lives relying on their family and spends their free time on unlawful activities, for example illegal motor racing. On the other hand, these people also affect the ones around them. They not only waste their parents’ finances but also embarrass their relatives due to their mistakes and crimes. They become the burdens of their families, in both economic and mental life. There are some ways which can be implemented to reduce the level of unemployment among youngsters. The foremost thing is that students have to determine adequate universities or colleges to study at, depending on their abilities and passion. Not everyone is able to be a doctor or an engineer. There must be someone who will become normal workers. In addition, authorities should call for the young more often in local voluntary programs. That can help them to avoid unhealthy lifestyle and bring them opportunities to discover their suitable aspects to devote to. Companies may be encouraged by the governments to consider giving these people more chance to apply for jobs. To conclude, young people leaving schools but unable to find jobs is always a noticeable matter in most societies. This group of people and the whole community need to act immediately and co-operate well to solve this problem. (289 words)
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  • Please check this task 2 for me! (Ielts). I WILL GIVE YOU 5 STARS!!!?

    In many countries more and more young people are leaving school but unable to find jobs. What problems do you think youth unemployment causes for individuals and the society? What measures should be taken to reduce the level of unemployment among youngsters? ====================================================== Today, the young being... hiển thị thêm
    In many countries more and more young people are leaving school but unable to find jobs. What problems do you think youth unemployment causes for individuals and the society? What measures should be taken to reduce the level of unemployment among youngsters? ========================================... Today, the young being unemployed after their graduation has become a social concern. This essay shall discuss the negative impacts of this issue on both individuals and community and suggest some solutions for it. To begin with, young people without work is the reason for the increase of social evils, which results in bigger amount of criminals. As a part of them cannot get jobs, they turn to dark ways to live, such as drug selling or prostitution. Another part lives relying on their family and spends their free time on unlawful activities, for example illegal motor racing. On the other hand, these people also affect the ones around them. They not only waste their parents’ finances but also embarrass their relatives due to their mistakes and crimes. They become the burdens of their families, in both economic and mental life. There are some ways which can be implemented to reduce the level of unemployment among youngsters. The foremost thing is that students have to determine adequate universities or colleges to study at, depending on their abilities and passion. Not everyone is able to be a doctor or an engineer. There must be someone who will become normal workers. In addition, authorities should call for the young more often in local voluntary programs. That can help them to avoid unhealthy lifestyle and bring them opportunities to discover their suitable aspects to devote to. Companies may be encouraged by the governments to consider giving these people more chance to apply for jobs. To conclude, young people leaving schools but unable to find jobs is always a noticeable matter in most societies. This group of people and the whole community need to act immediately and co-operate well to solve this problem. (289 words)
    1 câu trả lời · Giúp bài tập · 4 năm trước
  • I think my essay should be fixed? Can u help me please (5 stars for the best answer)?

    Air travel can only benefit the richest people in the world. Ordinary people can get no advantage with the development of air travel. To what extend do you agree or disagree? =========================================================== There appears an opinion that not ordinary people but the rich receive merits from air transportation.... hiển thị thêm
    Air travel can only benefit the richest people in the world. Ordinary people can get no advantage with the development of air travel. To what extend do you agree or disagree? ========================================... There appears an opinion that not ordinary people but the rich receive merits from air transportation. From my point of view, people without high living conditions can also benefit from this kind of travel. First of all, not all airlines are too expensive to book a ticket. In fact, in respond to the great demand of people from poor and average backgrounds, the number of firms that serve air travelling with cheap price is increasing all over the world. Therefore, people who have low and normal living conditions still get advantages from this service. For example, in Vietnam, a lot of customers choose Jet Star airline and Pacific airline for their trips, because they are satisfied with a more reasonable price, compared with Vietnam airline, while the quality is mostly similar. Secondly, in effort to meet the diversified needs of different groups of clients and give customers more choices, most arilines provide flexible levels of price. Specifically, in each flight, it can be seen that price for a luxurious seat is much higher than a normal spot. Moreover, to attract customers, many air brands have interesting promotion programs, such as “Fly with a ticket of 0 dollar”, “Discount to 50 percent”. These are good opportunities for ordinary people to have a cheaper flight. To conclude, despite the idea of air travelling is too deluxe, it is striving to satisfy various demands from all groups of people in the society. I personally believe that it would become a popular way for transportation in the near future. (255 words)
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  • Please fix this Ielts essay for me! I'm learning to write?

    Air travel can only benefit the richest people in the world. Ordinary people can get no advantage with the development of air travel. To what extend do you agree or disagree? =========================================================== There appears an opinion that not ordinary people but the rich receive merits from air transportation.... hiển thị thêm
    Air travel can only benefit the richest people in the world. Ordinary people can get no advantage with the development of air travel. To what extend do you agree or disagree? ========================================... There appears an opinion that not ordinary people but the rich receive merits from air transportation. From my point of view, people without high living conditions can also benefit from this kind of travel. First of all, not all airlines are too expensive to book a ticket. In fact, in respond to the great demand of people from poor and average backgrounds, the number of firms that serve air travelling with cheap price is increasing all over the world. Therefore, people who have low and normal living conditions still get advantages from this service. For example, in Vietnam, a lot of customers choose Jet Star airline and Pacific airline for their trips, because they are satisfied with a more reasonable price, compared with Vietnam airline, while the quality is mostly similar. Secondly, in effort to meet the diversified needs of different groups of clients and give customers more choices, most arilines provide flexible levels of price. Specifically, in each flight, it can be seen that price for a luxurious seat is much higher than a normal spot. Moreover, to attract customers, many air brands have interesting promotion programs, such as “Fly with a ticket of 0 dollar”, “Discount to 50 percent”. These are good opportunities for ordinary people to have a cheaper flight. To conclude, despite the idea of air travelling is too deluxe, it is striving to satisfy various demands from all groups of people in the society. I personally believe that it would become a popular way for transportation in the near future. (255 words)
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  • Please fix my essay for me! Thanks. I'll give yo 5 stars?

    Caring for children is an important thing of the society. It is suggested that all mothers and fathers should be required to take childcare training courses. To what extent do you agree or disagree? ======================================… In any nation, childcare is always a noticeable issue. It is recommended that parents need to participate in... hiển thị thêm
    Caring for children is an important thing of the society. It is suggested that all mothers and fathers should be required to take childcare training courses. To what extent do you agree or disagree? ======================================… In any nation, childcare is always a noticeable issue. It is recommended that parents need to participate in courses which train them how to take care of their children. I personally agree with this suggestion. First of all, caring for children is mentioned in terms of not only for their physical health but also their mental life. Many parents admit that they are confused about how to approach their kids when they grow up and become more mature. Hence, childcare is a complicated work and training courses are necessary. There, fathers and mothers learn the right skills and suitable methods to look after their kids from the very first years of life. For example, taking part in baby nursing class, a woman is taught the adequate diet to feed her daughter. In another course, a man is given advice to connect to his son in time of his puberty. These knowledges sound simply but not every parent is able to “practise” them well without learning. Secondly, most people care for their offspring based on their own experiences, in which some are from their parents. However, in the society today, lots of things have changed, including the way children are taken care. Thus, some of the experiences are backward thinking and disadvantageous. For instance, in Vietnam, many of the old ask their daughters to discard colostrum before breastfeeding. Nevertheless, according to scientists, the first milk is the most nutritious for an infant. If this mother has taken a childcare training class, she can know what is good for her kid. To conclude, childcare training courses which bring to parents knowledge to nurture their children are beneficial. I strongly believe all fathers and mothers should take part in these courses. (288 words)
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  • I have a writing task! Fix for me! 5 stars?

    Caring for children is an important thing of the society. It is suggested that all mothers and fathers should be required to take childcare training courses. To what extent do you agree or disagree? ============================================= In any nation, childcare is always a noticeable issue. It is recommended that parents need to... hiển thị thêm
    Caring for children is an important thing of the society. It is suggested that all mothers and fathers should be required to take childcare training courses. To what extent do you agree or disagree? ========================================... In any nation, childcare is always a noticeable issue. It is recommended that parents need to participate in courses which train them how to take care of their children. I personally agree with this suggestion. First of all, caring for children is mentioned in terms of not only for their physical health but also their mental life. Many parents admit that they are confused about how to approach their kids when they grow up and become more mature. Hence, childcare is a complicated work and training courses are necessary. There, fathers and mothers learn the right skills and suitable methods to look after their kids from the very first years of life. For example, taking part in baby nursing class, a woman is taught the adequate diet to feed her daughter. In another course, a man is given advice to connect to his son in time of his puberty. These knowledges sound simply but not every parent is able to “practise” them well without learning. Secondly, most people care for their offspring based on their own experiences, in which some are from their parents. However, in the society today, lots of things have changed, including the way children are taken care. Thus, some of the experiences are backward thinking and disadvantageous. For instance, in Vietnam, many of the old ask their daughters to discard colostrum before breastfeeding. Nevertheless, according to scientists, the first milk is the most nutritious for an infant. If this mother has taken a childcare training class, she can know what is good for her kid. To conclude, childcare training courses which bring to parents knowledge to nurture their children are beneficial. I strongly believe all fathers and mothers should take part in these courses. (288 words)
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  • I'm learning to write essay! Can you fix it for me to improve my English!?

    In most of the societies, the role of mother and father differs. What are the causes of this difference? What will be the parental roles in future? ====================================== In most of the societies, there exists a difference between the role of mother and father. There may be numerous reasons for this issue. In addition, I personally... hiển thị thêm
    In most of the societies, the role of mother and father differs. What are the causes of this difference? What will be the parental roles in future? ====================================== In most of the societies, there exists a difference between the role of mother and father. There may be numerous reasons for this issue. In addition, I personally consider that parental roles will forward to equality in the future. Since the very early time of human history, there has been a distinguish in mother and father’s role. It is firstly because of the differences in biological function. Although men contribute an important part to maintain the next generations, it is women who are pregnant and raise kids since they are infants. Thus, mothers generally have to spend more time than fathers on taking care of children. Secondly, it is human viewpoint toward two genders. Men are often considered the strong ones to become strict fathers and the pillars in families. Meanwhile, women is believed to be more fragile, they will develop into graceful mothers and play the major role in caring for their offspring and family work. Therefore, it is a sentence that “Father builds a house, mother makes it home”. Nowadays, there appears innovations in the role of mothers and fathers. Because living conditions are higher, in most families, both parents have to go to work to finance their lives, instead of only fathers did in many old societies. The husbands are now more responsible in growing the children and doing housework when the wives are busy completing their assignments at offices. As a consequence, it can be said that the gap in parents’ role would become smaller. To conclude, because of motherhood, women often have more responsibilities in a family. However, I strongly believe that in today’s more modern society, parental roles will tend to be fairer. (279 words)
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  • Please fix my essay. thanks?

    In most of the societies, the role of mother and father differs. What are the causes of this difference? What will be the parental roles in future? ====================================== In most of the societies, there exists a difference between the role of mother and father. There may be numerous reasons for this issue. In addition, I... hiển thị thêm
    In most of the societies, the role of mother and father differs. What are the causes of this difference? What will be the parental roles in future? ====================================== In most of the societies, there exists a difference between the role of mother and father. There may be numerous reasons for this issue. In addition, I personally consider that parental roles will forward to equality in the future. Since the very early time of human history, there has been a distinguish in mother and father’s role. It is firstly because of the differences in biological function. Although men contribute an important part to maintain the next generations, it is women who are pregnant and raise kids since they are infants. Thus, mothers generally have to spend more time than fathers on taking care of children. Secondly, it is human viewpoint toward two genders. Men are often considered the strong ones to become strict fathers and the pillars in families. Meanwhile, women is believed to be more fragile, they will develop into graceful mothers and play the major role in caring for their offspring and family work. Therefore, it is a sentence that “Father builds a house, mother makes it home”. Nowadays, there appears innovations in the role of mothers and fathers. Because living conditions are higher, in most families, both parents have to go to work to finance their lives, instead of only fathers did in many old societies. The husbands are now more responsible in growing the children and doing housework when the wives are busy completing their assignments at offices. As a consequence, it can be said that the gap in parents’ role would become smaller. To conclude, because of motherhood, women often have more responsibilities in a family. However, I strongly believe that in today’s more modern society, parental roles will tend to be fairer. (279 words)
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  • Please check this task 2 for me! (Ielts). I WILL GIVE YOU 5 STARS!!!?

    In most of the societies, the role of mother and father differs. What are the causes of this difference? What will be the parental roles in future? ====================================== In most of the societies, there exists a difference between the role of mother and father. There may be numerous reasons for this issue. In addition,... hiển thị thêm
    In most of the societies, the role of mother and father differs. What are the causes of this difference? What will be the parental roles in future? ====================================== In most of the societies, there exists a difference between the role of mother and father. There may be numerous reasons for this issue. In addition, I personally consider that parental roles will forward to equality in the future. Since the very early time of human history, there has been a distinguish in mother and father’s role. It is firstly because of the differences in biological function. Although men contribute an important part to maintain the next generations, it is women who are pregnant and raise kids since they are infants. Thus, mothers generally have to spend more time than fathers on taking care of children. Secondly, it is human viewpoint toward two genders. Men are often considered the strong ones to become strict fathers and the pillars in families. Meanwhile, women is believed to be more fragile, they will develop into graceful mothers and play the major role in caring for their offspring and family work. Therefore, it is a sentence that “Father builds a house, mother makes it home”. Nowadays, there appears innovations in the role of mothers and fathers. Because living conditions are higher, in most families, both parents have to go to work to finance their lives, instead of only fathers did in many old societies. The husbands are now more responsible in growing the children and doing housework when the wives are busy completing their assignments at offices. As a consequence, it can be said that the gap in parents’ role would become smaller. To conclude, because of motherhood, women often have more responsibilities in a family. However, I strongly believe that in today’s more modern society, parental roles will tend to be fairer. (279 words)
    1 câu trả lời · Giúp bài tập · 4 năm trước
  • Please fix my essay!! tell me where i can fix it, this is all i have so far..?

    The subjects and lesson contents are decided by the authorities such as the government. Some people argue that teachers should make the choice. Do you agree or disagree? ======================================… Authorities such as the governments often make decision on the contents of subjects and lessons. However, some people opine that teachers... hiển thị thêm
    The subjects and lesson contents are decided by the authorities such as the government. Some people argue that teachers should make the choice. Do you agree or disagree? ======================================… Authorities such as the governments often make decision on the contents of subjects and lessons. However, some people opine that teachers must be the deciders in this field. From my point of view, teachers play an important role in choosing what students study. The first reason that supports teachers to decide contents of subjects is they have a thorough understanding of what they have to teach. While the authorities normally set studying programs based on a general view about education system, teachers are the ones who put lectures into practise by imparting knowledge to learners. Therefore, they know deeply what is adequate or unsuitable, what is shorted or redundant in teaching contents, which are often decided by the governments. For example, in numerous countries, sexuality lessons should be introduced to students since they are at primary schools instead of secondary schools. Secondly, because the advanced purposes of education is to help people acquire knowledge, lessons and subjects must be in proportion with learners’ ability. By receiving students’ opinions about the contents that they are taught, it would help to improve the quality of teaching and studying. Authorities are often called “being far from reality”, meanwhile, as teachers stand on pulpit and directly contact with students, they are always able to notice ideas and petitions from the class. Thus, teachers must be the major part in building a standard education programs. To conclude, in education environment, teachers are the closest to students. Therefore, I strongly suggest that the governments must co-operate with them to create an effective educating programs for learners. (260 words)
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  • I wrote an Ielts writing Task 2 yesterday. Please fix it for me! Thanks a lot!?

    The subjects and lesson contents are decided by the authorities such as the government. Some people argue that teachers should make the choice. Do you agree or disagree? ======================================… Authorities such as the governments often make decision on the contents of subjects and lessons. However, some people opine that teachers... hiển thị thêm
    The subjects and lesson contents are decided by the authorities such as the government. Some people argue that teachers should make the choice. Do you agree or disagree? ======================================… Authorities such as the governments often make decision on the contents of subjects and lessons. However, some people opine that teachers must be the deciders in this field. From my point of view, teachers play an important role in choosing what students study. The first reason that supports teachers to decide contents of subjects is they have a thorough understanding of what they have to teach. While the authorities normally set studying programs based on a general view about education system, teachers are the ones who put lectures into practise by imparting knowledge to learners. Therefore, they know deeply what is adequate or unsuitable, what is shorted or redundant in teaching contents, which are often decided by the governments. For example, in numerous countries, sexuality lessons should be introduced to students since they are at primary schools instead of secondary schools. Secondly, because the advanced purposes of education is to help people acquire knowledge, lessons and subjects must be in proportion with learners’ ability. By receiving students’ opinions about the contents that they are taught, it would help to improve the quality of teaching and studying. Authorities are often called “being far from reality”, meanwhile, as teachers stand on pulpit and directly contact with students, they are always able to notice ideas and petitions from the class. Thus, teachers must be the major part in building a standard education programs. To conclude, in education environment, teachers are the closest to students. Therefore, I strongly suggest that the governments must co-operate with them to create an effective educating programs for learners. (260 words)
    1 câu trả lời · Giúp bài tập · 4 năm trước
  • Please fix my essay! 5 stars for you?

    Advertising influences people to buy things such as clothes and shoes. What are the problems caused by that? What solutions can be given? =======================================… Today, advertising affects consumers to buy various kinds of non-essential products. This essay shall discuss numerous drawbacks caused by this issue and suggest some... hiển thị thêm
    Advertising influences people to buy things such as clothes and shoes. What are the problems caused by that? What solutions can be given? =======================================… Today, advertising affects consumers to buy various kinds of non-essential products. This essay shall discuss numerous drawbacks caused by this issue and suggest some ways to solve these problems. To begin with, if people purchase too many goods such as clothes and shoes due to the effects of advertising, it will become disadvantageous. Firstly, it is uneconomic, both in terms of finances and time, to buy not really vital things. Secondly, advertising is one factor that makes a person be a follower of shopping, which could also be another type of being addicted. For example, although a girl does not have a high salary, she buys plenty of goods anytime she goes shopping. Thirdly and seriously, personality could be negatively impacted by bad consuming behaviors. Take an instance, if a child is always satisfied when he asks his parents to buy toys after watching advertisements, he may become a selfish boy who is ready to squander money. Fortunately, there are solutions for this issue. The governments should complete and tighten law to restrict the unuseful, totally commercial advertisements, for instance on their contents and frequency of appearance on difference kinds of media. Companies which specialize in promoting products for other firms through advertising may require a higher fees for certain fields. Parents should only satisfy their children’s reasonable demands on things which are necessary, not everything they see from commercial programs. On the other hand, purchasers, especially the young, need to learn how to consume in a smart and economic way. To conclude, besides the merits, advertising also negatively influences consumers and leads to social waste. Advanced measures must be implemented to prevent this situation. (275 words)
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  • My task 2 Ielts, please help me to make it better! Thanks a lot?

    Advertising influences people to buy things such as clothes and shoes. What are the problems caused by that? What solutions can be given? ================================================ Today, advertising affects consumers to buy various kinds of non-essential products. This essay shall discuss numerous drawbacks caused by this issue... hiển thị thêm
    Advertising influences people to buy things such as clothes and shoes. What are the problems caused by that? What solutions can be given? ========================================... Today, advertising affects consumers to buy various kinds of non-essential products. This essay shall discuss numerous drawbacks caused by this issue and suggest some ways to solve these problems. To begin with, if people purchase too many goods such as clothes and shoes due to the effects of advertising, it will become disadvantageous. Firstly, it is uneconomic, both in terms of finances and time, to buy not really vital things. Secondly, advertising is one factor that makes a person be a follower of shopping, which could also be another type of being addicted. For example, although a girl does not have a high salary, she buys plenty of goods anytime she goes shopping. Thirdly and seriously, personality could be negatively impacted by bad consuming behaviors. Take an instance, if a child is always satisfied when he asks his parents to buy toys after watching advertisements, he may become a selfish boy who is ready to squander money. Fortunately, there are solutions for this issue. The governments should complete and tighten law to restrict the unuseful, totally commercial advertisements, for instance on their contents and frequency of appearance on difference kinds of media. Companies which specialize in promoting products for other firms through advertising may require a higher fees for certain fields. Parents should only satisfy their children’s reasonable demands on things which are necessary, not everything they see from commercial programs. On the other hand, purchasers, especially the young, need to learn how to consume in a smart and economic way. To conclude, besides the merits, advertising also negatively influences consumers and leads to social waste. Advanced measures must be implemented to prevent this situation. (275 words)
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  • Please check this IELTS task 2 for me! (fix and idea). I WILL GIVE YOU 5 STARS!!!?

    Advertising influences people to buy things such as clothes and shoes. What are the problems caused by that? What solutions can be given? ================================================ Today, advertising affects consumers to buy various kinds of non-essential products. This essay shall discuss numerous drawbacks caused by this issue... hiển thị thêm
    Advertising influences people to buy things such as clothes and shoes. What are the problems caused by that? What solutions can be given? ========================================... Today, advertising affects consumers to buy various kinds of non-essential products. This essay shall discuss numerous drawbacks caused by this issue and suggest some ways to solve these problems. To begin with, if people purchase too many goods such as clothes and shoes due to the effects of advertising, it will become disadvantageous. Firstly, it is uneconomic, both in terms of finances and time, to buy not really vital things. Secondly, advertising is one factor that makes a person be a follower of shopping, which could also be another type of being addicted. For example, although a girl does not have a high salary, she buys plenty of goods anytime she goes shopping. Thirdly and seriously, personality could be negatively impacted by bad consuming behaviors. Take an instance, if a child is always satisfied when he asks his parents to buy toys after watching advertisements, he may become a selfish boy who is ready to squander money. Fortunately, there are solutions for this issue. The governments should complete and tighten law to restrict the unuseful, totally commercial advertisements, for instance on their contents and frequency of appearance on difference kinds of media. Companies which specialize in promoting products for other firms through advertising may require a higher fees for certain fields. Parents should only satisfy their children’s reasonable demands on things which are necessary, not everything they see from commercial programs. On the other hand, purchasers, especially the young, need to learn how to consume in a smart and economic way. To conclude, besides the merits, advertising also negatively influences consumers and leads to social waste. Advanced measures must be implemented to prevent this situation. (275 words)
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  • Please check this IELTS task 2 for me! I WILL GIVE YOU 5 Stars?

    In some countries, it is illegal for companies to reject job applicant for their age. Is this a positive or negative development? ======================================… In numerous countries today, companies are not allowed to refuse recruiting people due to their ages. In my opinion, this is a positive point. To begin with, the law which... hiển thị thêm
    In some countries, it is illegal for companies to reject job applicant for their age. Is this a positive or negative development? ======================================… In numerous countries today, companies are not allowed to refuse recruiting people due to their ages. In my opinion, this is a positive point. To begin with, the law which prohibits businesses rejecting employees at certain ages helps to increase the employment rate. If every firm only employs young people and ignore older ones, unemployment will be a serious problem. However, nowadays, age limitation is often included in job description. For example, a bank recruits female tellers from twenty two to twenty six years old. A person must be over thirty to apply for the chief accountant position. Once there is an intervention of policy, people at different ages may find occupations more easily. As a result, the government can spend less on welfare for the unemployed. Moreover, social fairness could be improved by preventing the discrimination between ages in seeking jobs. In addition, this policy is advantageous for companies. If employers ignore curriculum vitae just because their owners are not as young or old as they require, they may lose talented people. A woman who is over twenty seven can also be an excellent teller. Applicants are the first ones who realize if they can respond to a job, and a smart manager must be able to filter the best employees. Therefore, a business should obey this law, create a chance, and they will not miss potential ones due to the ages. To conclude, the policy mentioned in this essay brings merits to both the society and businesses. I strongly support that ages should not be the major factor which decides whether a person is employed. (267 words)
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  • Please fix my essay!! tell me where i can fix it, this is all i have so far..?

    In some countries, it is illegal for companies to reject job applicant for their age. Is this a positive or negative development? ================================== In numerous countries today, companies are not allowed to refuse recruiting people due to their ages. In my opinion, this is a positive point. To begin with, the... hiển thị thêm
    In some countries, it is illegal for companies to reject job applicant for their age. Is this a positive or negative development? ================================== In numerous countries today, companies are not allowed to refuse recruiting people due to their ages. In my opinion, this is a positive point. To begin with, the law which prohibits businesses rejecting employees at certain ages helps to increase the employment rate. If every firm only employs young people and ignore older ones, unemployment will be a serious problem. However, nowadays, age limitation is often included in job description. For example, a bank recruits female tellers from twenty two to twenty six years old. A person must be over thirty to apply for the chief accountant position. Once there is an intervention of policy, people at different ages may find occupations more easily. As a result, the government can spend less on welfare for the unemployed. Moreover, social fairness could be improved by preventing the discrimination between ages in seeking jobs. In addition, this policy is advantageous for companies. If employers ignore curriculum vitae just because their owners are not as young or old as they require, they may lose talented people. A woman who is over twenty seven can also be an excellent teller. Applicants are the first ones who realize if they can respond to a job, and a smart manager must be able to filter the best employees. Therefore, a business should obey this law, create a chance, and they will not miss potential ones due to the ages. To conclude, the policy mentioned in this essay brings merits to both the society and businesses. I strongly support that ages should not be the major factor which decides whether a person is employed. (267 words)
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